改任意诗《打嗝》(2024.12.6号星期五)

这是砸诗日,张萌值班,上来一首诗,不知是谁的:


我一看就把它改了:


张萌评道:1🉐妙,紧跟着又评道:1出味道来了。

最后揭底,原来是任意的。

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