《委婉语》（date known but not given)

By Ouyang Yu

 


Comment by DE: “委婉得啰哩啰嗦”

Comment by LX: "委婉得很有耐心，我必须耐心地读完它，护士名弄错，作为一首病中吟，错得很值得。"

Comment by LL: "絮叨得不错，委婉语还蛮有诗意😯"


Comment by HYK: "委婉语，新鲜，不过不像诗歌"。“小品。”


Comment by XM: "《委婉语》，絮叨，款曲，错乱，娇滴……最后来一下讳饰——销魂窟嘻嘻"


Comment by DE: “小说。其实03依然不错。”


Comment by TX: “诗已经不足以形容这样的写作，它高于诗，这种打碎文字表象直取本质的艺术让人想起毕加索的画。”


Comment by ZQ: “叙事者指涉的写法值得借鉴。”


Comment by PP: “在住院期间，还有心情写诗，这心态一级棒。”


欧阳自评1：现在以挑剔的眼光来看自己，觉得最后一个“诗”字可以拿掉，这叫自砸，谢谢值班和大家


欧阳自评2：我觉得“这不是诗”或“这不像诗歌”，是对我的赞许。我已经非常瞧不起非常像诗歌的诗歌了，恕我直言


欧阳自评3：我鼓励别人写非常像诗的诗，我鼓励自己写一点都不像诗的东西，dig that！







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